Comments of chapter undefined of The Final Act

Your story reminds me of theater shows like Phantom of the Opera. Intrigues me immediately with your writing style

Although there were a few mistakes, your first chapter hooked me.

your story us good so far keep it up

awesome premise!

awesome

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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

A goodie!

And here I am...rooting for Evelina to rule her clan. Go girl!

I love books with vampires so much. Really looking forward to reading some more

Your story is good and has a good narration. Intriguing start for me. Keep it up .☺️ May I ask what is "bathing blood blue in hue" means?

Me knowing that I'm one of the first readers before this gets famous 😎

Love the beginning so far! Great introduction to the world and the politics!