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+18 - Harem Palace Sect's System

Morvian

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synaesthesia
synaesthesiaLv5synaesthesia

The vocabulary and grammar is worse than a primary schoolers, the synopsis alone has more than 30 grammatical errors.. how is it possible to read this..

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Morvian
MorvianAuthorMorvian

Author here!~ This novel will be hentai intended so be careful, although its not every chapter but it would sometimes appear so KIDS begone from here!~ I didn't give full 5 star since although I have confidence on my own writing, it wouldn't be same in other eyes (you! yeah you!). Its not like I'm genius in English, so I'm taking full minus star for this flaw as my motivation to improve though I doubt that no one will pick it since I'm sure cliche review will appear about it.

EpicEvan
EpicEvanLv14EpicEvan

This is a very high-class and sophisticated novel Which requires extreme IQ and knowledge of political events around the world to truly appreciate! The World building is Top Class, If there is no 3th wall breaking by the author whatsoever. Power level seems balanced and the fights so far are very exciting ;) oh and it has foreshadowing so it must be good

Radista
RadistaLv4Radista

this is novel which is created especially for us man of culture, many gentleman should comes here lol! recommended for people who love sweet nectar, kids need to be scram! huh? I'm a kid? what? I'm ***** already!

DeadSoil
DeadSoilLv13DeadSoil

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UncleOddball
UncleOddballLv5UncleOddball

... ... ... Dude. My eyes are aching. I was intrigued by that one bad grammar review and nasty responses to it, and a truckload if 5* reviews... So, I've decided to give it a spin, but, in all honesty, looks like machine translation that was left unatended. Just the first chapter gangbanged my poor eyes without a lube. I don't have anything against people trying their hand on the art of writing, but I think you should at the very least respect your readers with some quality. As it seems, a lot of people are trying to support your story, why don't you ask someone to proofread and/or edit it for you? The 1* comes from writing quality, the rest is at it too just to not falsely boost the value, as I think the story itsekf can't be so vad if people git yoyr back.

IONLYSPEAKMONDA
IONLYSPEAKMONDALv5IONLYSPEAKMONDA

a great jewel, a beauty created by God. a fantasy of all otaku this novel is a description of my fantasia. Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

giancarlo812
giancarlo812Lv5giancarlo812

loving this novel's story and world , wish i could go there myself , the author is obviously very creative , imaginative and intelligent to have created this fine work of art , hopefully he will continue to write this legendary masterpiece

Read84
Read84Lv4Read84

Could not make it past the first paragraph. Terribly done and just not worth the effort of any REAL cultured person. Would recommend you write it in your own language as that may have some hope of progression and growth.

gianca
giancaLv5gianca

great novel , really good story , interesting themes and scenarios , the mc appears to have some intriguing abilities , i'm looking forward to seeing how quickly and how big his harem gets

Just_as_I_Planned
Just_as_I_PlannedLv5Just_as_I_Planned

Slow paced story development with a good.character design , reincarnated male and female which is unique unlike other novels that full of.regrets with their past lives . I think it.is a fantasy based realm so i hope there would be another races like Highschool dxd with so many factions .

Afida15
Afida15Lv5Afida15

Well, i like this novel and we are from the same country, so i just hope you didn't drop this novel, like others author from this country!!! .........................................................................................

ROnin2k02
ROnin2k02Lv5ROnin2k02

Daniel Bryan style: YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YEEEEEEESSSS!!!! Every [Man of Culture] will find this quite satisfying. Thanks for the hard work!

LonelyAlphaWolf
LonelyAlphaWolfLv15LonelyAlphaWolf

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Quidanstealsnovels
QuidanstealsnovelsLv10Quidanstealsnovels

Haven't even began to read it yet but I can instantly see how horrible the grammar is in the synopsis. If you can't use English well then don't make a story with it.

Otonashi_Yuzuru
Otonashi_YuzuruLv13Otonashi_Yuzuru

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Loldassjs
LoldassjsLv10Loldassjs

Everything about this novel is good also author's writing style is unique. (*cough) but it is understandable and so far it has hooked my interest. . I just hope author regularly updates this novel and doesn't drop it in between.

Kartgo
KartgoLv11Kartgo

please do not pay attention to the useless comments of some people, continue with the releases as usual and thank you...................!!!!!!! More chapter pls!! good luck

jameslarino
jameslarinoLv11jameslarino

Need more chapter... ➕➕🅰🅰🅰➕➕ 🍀🍀😊😊😊🍀🍀 📖📖🙏🙏🙏📖📖 ➕➕🅰🅰🅰➕➕ 🍀🍀😊😊😊🍀🍀 📖📖🙏🙏🙏📖📖 ➕➕🅰🅰🅰➕➕ 🍀🍀😊😊😊🍀🍀 📖📖🙏🙏🙏📖📖 ➕➕🅰🅰🅰➕➕ 🍀🍀😊😊😊🍀🍀 📖📖🙏🙏🙏📖📖

MadDog390
MadDog390Lv11MadDog390

This is a good novel.Like it up until now.Just wanted to show my support for author.Hope you win the competition. Now to complete word limit:$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$S$$$$$$$$$$$$$€$$$$$$$$$$¥$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$