83 Explanation For The Last Chapter & Little Whinning!~
Sorry for the confusion in the last chapter!~ *Dogeza*
1. Father in-law angry with his daughter's choice to be with Zars (past)...
Its lead to him ignoring them and not trying to monitor their lives, which was later proven fatal since he didn't save them before it was too late.
2. He(Father in-law) didn't want to intrude the people who had similar level with him into their domain to perform time jump! well...like doing time spell to save them since the consequences are too much for him... he can do time spell if the two die in his domain but they didn't
Of course in the end he killed the enemy after he found out his daughter was killed...
3. After being forced by his wife... he did kill the domain's owner (sneakily) since it's not part of the story I didn't go into detail... so sorry...
4. As for double reincarnation.
First Zars is dead in the past... (he is like cliche protagonist so he did everything without thinking about consequences in the past)
With his father-in-law's help Zars's soul made it back to his old past... before that his father-in-law creating multiple seals in his incomplete memories then sent it into Crystal (young).
It was the cause of him being matured early...
As for the second reincarnation? after he is dead together with Tanya (Neisyah)
He was reincarnated or being transferred (his soul) but he created his own body in his father-in-law's universe... (With application which his father in-law changed into system)
5. As for the daughter of a man... is Alice, who is now Nirsyah (2nd wife).
Could this explain the confusion? hopefully so... -_-
6. The meteor is the ball which has fallen since the title has explained it already? Or not?
Truthfully I didn't write that chapter in one go... every-time I write one sentence my sister hijacked the laptop again... and again... in a moment she would wake up and then BAM ...she would hijack this laptop again...
If I chased her out, it would lead me to fight with my psycho father which would lead him to know this laptop's existence. Then he would take it back since this latop was his wife's, not mine.
Forgive this poor author who didn't have his own laptop... even my (slow) learning in English is disturbed by her~ lol...
These 4 days are hell for me -_-
Lastly I didn't intend to make this protagonist go into another universe so he would stop and stay in this universe which his father-in-law created...
I mean his harem would be too huge if he did that..lol~
After all I only targeted this novel which has 500k-1Million words... So I would avoid making him go into another universe only to meet the enemy...
since I didn't make this protagonist as a battle junkie... and that would lead to me make too much loop in the story if I make him go into another universe.
So there's no revenge plot here since his father-in-law killed his killer already and the memories of that part have been damaged...
There are some messy explanations for every reply in the last chapter but I write it in here to make it more clear?...
Okay guys thanks and sorry for all being strong to follow me with this journey which I really think is hard.
Why was it so hard? after all I'm not a pro author and if my skill should be placed in level... maybe it would be at zero... I'm really tempted to write in my country language but since this novel is contracted already so... I will try to finish this in English (my broken English) language since it was what I started...
Even if it's slow... I still try to improve myself which could be seen is really slow and sometimes nonexistent?
Once again, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year (since it was like 2 days left?)... Oh man~ I'm old now this January since my age is 28... How I wish to go back and learn English with youth's brain... although I could be called malnourished since my psycho father didn't give us enough money, back then I only think as long as I can finish school and eat food to not get hungry is fine...
I never thought English was important in the past...since you know the course of English learning in my area back then was double of my family living expenses for a month...
So I only see English is for rich people in the past...if I can see the future where I need that English Language as skill for me writing like this then maybe I would take a drastic route to pickpocket someone's wallet for the payment of an English course...
P.S: My daily pocket money is like this in the past.
Primary School
Class 1: 100 rupiah.
Class 2: 200 rupiah.
Class 3: 300 rupiah.
Class 4: 400 rupiah.
Class 5: 500 rupiah.
Class 6: 600 rupiah.
Junior High School
Class 1: 1000 rupiah.
Class 2: 1000 rupiah.
Class 3: 1000 rupiah.
High School
Class 1: 2000 rupiah.
Class 2: 3000 rupiah.
Class 3: 3000 rupiah.
Class could be replaced by year... like Class 1 will become 1st year...As for why I didn't try to get a part-time job? In my area back then, there's no such thing like that...
Once I was trying to become a food merchant in the past, but it's still forbidden by my psycho father since he didn't want me(selling something for money) to be seen by other people.
Well I'm confused about how to explain... but yeah It's really easy to explain my life in Indonesian language than English hahaha
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I didn't edit the last chapter since it was like rice has been cooked into porridge already lol!
I can only try to explain the confusion with this.
Hopefully it can clear some confusion.
Usually I use scribens since it helps me to point out awkward sentences and run-on sentences which I would correct manually or automatically.
Since this week my psycho father is always watching video nonstop, these 5 days the laptop keeps being hijacked by my little sister and lastly my headaches are still there so I can't focus like usual.
So, once again! Sorry for the confusion.
P.S: One of the causes is me being too focused on making long chapters when the situation didn't support me which led into mess.
