Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Thank you for the chapter, I’m dying on the inside due to chapters not releasing as much, but they’re really good!!

dude please release it today.. don't want to be hanged till new year

I usually hate scenes where some woman teases the main character and mc shivers at that or blushes too much or woman says things like plucking his dick off or simply said, I hate it when main character is manipulated. But it is bearable in your work and that is one reason why I love your work. Also, don't you think Sirius suddenly coming for marriage, just after Aedan refused to join Order, was suspicious? Then his pressing to marry before the war and as quickly as possible... It is too suspicious. Like, Dumbeldore has planned to use Aedan and as he can't do shit to him, he will control him through his aunt. Sirius is loyal to Harry ... yeah and he is loyal to Dumbeldore, in the other hand, The love life between Amelia and Sirius is still not clear. But from what I read it felt that Amelia had fallen for Sirius and not the other way round. It gives me a feeling that Sirius just wants to use Amelia to get protection from Aedan for the Order as, Sirius is definitely, gonna work for the order and Aedan will have no option but to protect him if he wants to preserve Amelia's happiness. I hope that Amelia and Aedan are smart enough and have already done a background check on this sudden love story or maybe it's for the plot. I actually wanted Amelia to marry because Aedan and Tory need screen time and it is not possible till Susan and Amelia are here. I want him to shift to their new house soon.

Noooooo.....fing cliffhanger, why is every author practicing the dao of cliff hanger these days

Sirius and Amelia look too sudden and unnatural for me.

Thanks for another magnificent chapter, happy that Tory’s mother is finally awake and I’m looking forward to reading about their future schemes!

I didn't like Sirius with Amelia, he is not worthy of her

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author 😜 A Fantastic Chapter As Always 😉

Amelia and Sirius are such a cringe and forced couple in HP fanfiction. It was really good so far but this just makes me want to drop the whole story.

Great chapter and i saw no issues with the Sirius and Amelia drop

After all this time and chapters I still really don't like adean and Tory together and I really don't like sirius and Amelia together that came out of nowhere

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The Biggest Cliffhanger on this Chapter.

Merci pour le chapitre !

Author your other novel with the Harry Potter, pls continue, *sniff*

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Happy New Year

Thanks for chapter

Thanks for the chapter