I really liked how you drew me into your story author!
You’re really concise with your description of the characters, though the world view description needs just a little improvement.
I love how you make me want to know and see more. Please update soon as I would like to see more from you❤️
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This is good! The description is superb. I could truly imagine the place which was described well. It is simple and light. I am looking forward for more.
This story deserves more views. The world is truly captivating, the author did a great job developing both the characters and their abilities. I loved that it is so descriptive and very well written.