LocoWriter911
His conversation with raynare is kinda bugged me, but it's just a small matter. Now, why MC doesn't order Danzo to swept criminal organization on Kuoh? There is always an 'unruly bunch' wherever it is. It won't make MC feels bad(maybe? He is kinda like a chaotic good alignment or something) He can clean Kuoh and got money or maybe their asset at the same time while he is still concealed from the heiress duo of Kuoh. Building his base power in the background, manipulate the event to get the holy sword or something... yeah, I just hope he becomes a manipulator in shadow. Pls forget the random rambling, this novel is quite a piece. I hope you have the motivation to finish this, good luck?
Nice job! For a second there I thought this story was dropped (sorry for this. It's just that I've become paranoid after seeing decent DxD fan-fics getting dropped with very few chapters... It happened ALOT). Thanks for the good work and I look forward to more chapters! Also, interesting take here, never saw anyone giving two fucks about Raynare, this is really unexpected... AND EXCITING!!