Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Lost Son

Now i have only two complaints: 1) You have several typing mistakes in this chapter you seem to be writing Umbridge instead of Umbitch 2) You need to post more often

ooh dumbeldore you ****ed up

Future prank ideas: 1. Have a potion, enchantment or hex change the Professor's and/or student's full body skin color to match their house (like body paint). So Slytherin will be full of green people, Gryffindor Red people, Ravenclaw blue people, and Hufflepuff pink people. 2. Random voice/pitch changes of students and professors. Snape speaking with a squeaky girlish voice, a girl with the voice of a giant, etc.. 3. Extreme hair and facial hair growth (goes away after a set time naturally) but the attempt at magically release/curing the spell causes temporary baldness. 4. Homing cloud/s that rain down small groups of different candies intermittently throughout the day while following their targets. If you try to get rid of it it becomes a downpour of machinegun like candy ferocity. 5. Foam trap that releases large amounts of foam onto the target's. When they try clean or get rid of it using magic the majority disappears but the remaining foam is attracted to and attaches to the culprits head/hair giving them a semi-permanent foam afro.

thanks for the chapter but i need

FUCK YESSSSS

Thanks for the chapter. Please update more chapters. Can't wait to see the trial and more of Dumbledore's plans fail.

Thanks for the chapter Keep writing this is a good story

This is the most evil Dumbledore I knew yes there is even a Dumbledore that fly ascaban with fawks and avada kedavra Sirius but this one more sinister and much annoying. But really just because of that old goat Mc shouldn't stop living hogwarts I want him to study, to use Room of requirements, and maybe even abuse the Chamber of secrets (he can go there with his Phoenix) in canon chamber of secrets sucks and nothing in there maybe Mc becomes parselmouth with using locket of Salazar slytherin? After cleansed it because we didn't see any power of locket even if its going to make Salazar OOC its worth I think that guy not important as it is. If he can abuse locket as I said then you won't have to use Harry also abusing parseltongue with spells and making chamber of secrets worthy as legend is really good tropes in fanfiction. But really Mc is Too into in politics he is just got in hogwarts and it's not bad for now but you can't contunie the drama between Mc and Dumbledore or any sheep wizard if we can't see the guy develop magically, personality then why it's even self insert. Dumbledore being TOOOOO evil make soo damn hard to progress Mc personally or giving him alone time but you should make somehow in the end Harry Potter fanfictions and Conan story's magic is hogwarts and because Dumbledore now hogwarts is a problem I believe you can fix this there was a foreshadow that hogwarts is sentient so I am waiting for that, hogwarts to do something for Mc or everyone. I am also somewhat speculate if Dumbledore maybe effected by horcrux or anything to become evil personality because he is literally broken and OOC right know not just evil Dumbledore trope.

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for coming back

more please i want to see a trial

thanks for the chapter 😊.but I need more

FR!CK YOU, THIS CHAPTER MADE ME ExTRA WET AND YOU JUST END IT OFF ON A CLIFFHANGER... foreshame

thanks for the chapter love your fics need more of this one so good [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

thanks for the chapter but as the other said we do need more please don't quit keep

Thanks for the great chapter glad you finally updated, you should try balancing between this story and one piece cause the later is twice longer already and this one haven’t been updated for weeks.

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

keep writing it's a great story please keep updating

Please update soon.