Charan56
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood... I have created over a thousand useless reviews... Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality... I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews... Yet these hands will never tap anything... So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
Wriring quality- Very Good Story Development- Standard Death->God/Goddess-> Wish Chacter design- Good. MC is smart. Updating Stability- TBD World Background- Mash-up of different works. It's rare to see mash-up type of stories this days. It's ussually tranmigrate/reincarnated to a canon or au world then jumping to another one. Keep up the good work Author-san!
This will be my second review so far and it is also a personal opinion, there are no problems so far in the novel only except for wishes and here is why: - You should change the wishes or reduce the amount of them they are too nerfed and unbalanced, the first two wishes are fine but the others ... 3- creation of skills: in itself this is very Op since it can go hand in hand with the fourth wish (energy support) when in itself the creation of skills is usually the culmination of the user's experience or enlightenment. Or that he meets an old man or his grandfather (with his mysterious story = that he is related to the supernatural and has fought Falbium Asmodeus (the 4th maou in charge of military affairs and they are tied) in only physical combat and a friendly relationship and teach him martial arts (his grandfather and something like Hiten Mitsurugi-ryu from samurai X, or Kyotōryū from Katanagatari, or skills from Yu Yu Hakusho touki) There is a whole universe of shonen anime out there ... 4- infinite mana: this if this nerf, I think it would have been better to wish something like a son of mana "which makes it sensitive to mana in its environment and its manipulation with a mana container larger than many people, beings, etc. .. (upper middle class) when I grow up upper class 5- infinite luck (EX): really ?? Put a limiter like: infinite luck for 24 hours you will have more luck than any being but after the agreed time EX level bad luck for the next 24 hours, this is how it balances. 6- supergrowth: or the will of the strongest (SSS); nothing can stop you on your way to the top if you wish (limitations = your own will stops you, so fight for it!) super generic on shonen, but it wouldn't be bad here. 7- have magic of space and time: it would be better to have knowledge or be more sensitive to these energies and their understanding. 8- have Saiki Kusuo's powers under control: I think that with only this wish you have to do enough to the MC Op since you will have his powers under control although it would be more interesting if instead of having them at the moment a vague control did it It will be better Opt for them for your own training. Since if he stays like this later, you will possibly have problems continuing the story since with such an imbalance there would be no emotion for his fights or dangerous situations just because he is Op, which leads you to write delusional situations to balance the situation.. Or characters equal or more broken than their original version.... That has happened in many fanfics in webnovel or other novels...
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