Comments of chapter undefined of The Future In The Past

The Future In The Past

Supremely_Innocent

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Green_JadeLv3Green_Jade

I like how you made this first chapter. I think you should try to write more in this perspective. Though, I'm not pressuring you to. Please write in any style that is comfortable for you.

3yr

Green_JadeLv3Green_Jade

Considering that the author mostly writes in 3rd POV, I would say she's much better with it. However, I really want to see her write another FPOV. This first chapter is like letting us stare at food, but not be able to eat it.

Empress_Innocent:Do you think the author is better in 3rd POV or FPOV?
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3yr

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Empress_InnocentLv4Empress_Innocent

I like how consistent you are with the FPOV. Lots of authors continuously switch back and forth, and it makes it a pain for me to read. I hope you can continue to write in this way.

3yr

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Celestial_EmpressLv1Celestial_Empress

After going through all the chapters, I found out that only the prologue has the FPOV. Author, will you plan to write more FPOVs for this novel in the future?

3yr

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