After going through all the chapters, I found out that only the prologue has the FPOV. Author, will you plan to write more FPOVs for this novel in the future?
I like how consistent you are with the FPOV. Lots of authors continuously switch back and forth, and it makes it a pain for me to read. I hope you can continue to write in this way.
I like how you made this first chapter. I think you should try to write more in this perspective. Though, I'm not pressuring you to. Please write in any style that is comfortable for you.