Roh594
Honestly i like twilighT novels but The Wishes he wants seem pretty lame First of all He gets is Ability to read minds n visions an to give Vampire the abilitiy to eat an have kids seem trash Theres another minor wish but its pointless honestly should of wished for something way better that make him op in that world instead he just a normal human pretty much an Scared he will be exposed so what? If you have true power what can they Do to you abSolute nothing Anyways im droppin
I think you should reread your chapters before publishing them. A lot of obvious grammatical errors. Run on sentences, missing commas, forgetting to capitalize at the beginning of the sentence, and etc. Iâve tried the whole author thing myself. Wasnât as prepared as I should have been so I sort of dropped it real quick but the one thing I tried to do was to keep the grammar as clean as I could so the readers wouldnât struggle as much. Iâm an avid reader so i notice errors quickly. Sometimes I can ignore it if its not too bad but other times I canât. You were getting close to that point for me. I am not trying to put you down or anything I just want this story to work out cuz i have seen too many good fanfics dropped way too early. Just do your best and donât stress. Iâm rooting for you.