Comments of chapter undefined of GodKing of Life

what about atg, scene that world is have a Phoenix in primordial era, or any cultivation world like the soul land 3, 2 and 1

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

As some has said; Reincarnation of a slime, date a live Also toaru majutsu no index , Campione, and Bakemonogatari

So what will happen to all orphan in orphanage? Did he just forget them?

Hey isn't there a pheonix clan in the great ruler? O think that will be the best.

darker than black

That was a really huge prologue. Normally the MC reincarnates at most in Chapter 2, in addition to his 2 unnecessarily large prologue chapters ... A reader with less patience could drop the novel before it even started. I may be wrong, this is just my opinion but I believe that such a big prologue hurts a fanfic. I really like the idea of an MC Phoenix but only if he really uses the phoenix shape, even if it is to fly faster. With a non-human MC it is very important to make constant use of both forms of the MC or it would be better to just give him the title of god of life and all its potential while keeping the race as human. Again making it clear that I'm not insulting the author's work, just giving my opinion to anyone who might be interested in knowing (sorry for any mistake, i used google translator)

Atg sounds like the perfect place

harry potter

harry potter, easy early world and a good base to lean magic

Maybe arifureta?

Reincarnation as a slime And hope 1 Of the world will be emperor domination

Great chapter ^^ Maybe akame ga kill? Since its not really a strong world but he cant earn much from that world i think

thx for the chap

Soooo good the way they describe the actions and the characters are so well made and different from the other novels here its soooo good

Thanks for the chapter!

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Amazing fanfic bro wkkwk

i think you should create a new cultivation world

ASOIAF