Comments of chapter undefined of Ben 10: Justice Incarnate

Ben 10: Justice Incarnate

Firestorm808

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AlucardRP_16Lv4AlucardRP_16

Maybe I'm being boring but I have to say what I feel ... I feel that the author is not using all the potential that this story can have, the story has a slow pace, the updates of the chapters are also slow ... and the protagonist doesn't seem to want to draw attention or take any interesting action ... this ends up making the story a slice of life. (Google translator)

3yr

Firestorm808AuthorFirestorm808

I'm working on balancing the casual and energetic moments in the story. Rest assured, any romance will be taking a back seat while I take care of the timeline I'm working towards.

Daiost_Chan:I don't mind if the story goes bit into a slice of life, but something gotta be interesting about it. It cant be a log book of actions MC has with ''conversations'' that lead to ''*** scenes'' with different girls.

3yr

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darkstar100Lv10darkstar100

can you make a my hero academia fan fic with Ben 10

3yr

Tracy_HillLv4Tracy_Hill

this is an awesome series I hope you can make more when you can

2yr

darkergrimLv4darkergrim

Ayy i hope u haveNt dropped I like this ff

3yr

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TheOtherLv3TheOther

will he be a nanny ??

3yr

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_cute_slime_Lv5_cute_slime_

need more vitamin c ( chapter )

3yr

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perser_112Lv2perser_112

very good story. I hope it is not abandoned, I look forward to continuing.

3yr

hyperjackLv4hyperjack

I think using alien X to create the planets was a fun idea to play with you should try to do that more. Also I'm just hoping for now but maybe you could use upgrade in the fight against the red family, see the kind of modifications you could add to them

3yr