With flowing, crystal-clear descriptions, I found this novel to be simple to imagine yet gripping, especially the battle scenes. Not only that, but the dialogues between the characters seamlessly weaved itself into the chaos unfolding, leaving little, if any, additional alterations to the plot.
Grammar— flawless, even I wish for this kind of clarity sometimes. XD
While on a side note, I did feel as if there was less usage of some sensory senses, such as smell or touch, which might have improved readers’ immersions. But do take this advice with a grain of salt, these itty gritty details may not be necessary in your work at all.
Overall, a splendid work, Author ! Keep it up !
