W.S : The Hybrid

Awesome book, really catchy on the first chapter but the second chapter was an information dump and I thought... well, it wouldn't be that bad??? And then the POVS came. There were like five of them? I think. I did follow the story but for other readers, this would be really confusing. Still, there's an easy way to fix this! First, remove the information dump and just add it on someone's pov, preferably Elizabeth. And then, since you still only have a few chapters, you can slowly introduce all the characters and then the POV's would come naturally. That's because POV's shouldn't be used to separate characters. It should be used when characters interact with the protagonist. For example, Person a interacts with person b in person a's POV... then the next chapter, Person B interacts with person a in person b's pov. With this, characters would be slowly introduced and there would be no information dump. All in all a great book though and the premise is great. I added it to my library and I wish you the best, author! Keep it up!