alex02373
Lol. The explanation on comments was spot on. This ain't like the game with 100%-50% accuracy ratings. Anything can be trained and pokemon can die if they are killed, hence using potions to keep them alive is a sure way to bankrupcy if you're not an alliance elite. I wonder if poke virus would come up in the novel (a friend of mine had a gba of pokemon who got the pokemon virus that made his pokemon lvl up easily he also said it was rarer than a shiny.)
i rarely post but thought you might need someone to say the positive about your novel. 1. Not a lot of pokemon train, a lot of the "better" written novel in WN (imo), caught and train way too many pokemon and switch depending on the fights. it's well written but if you're like me and read bunch of novels and like dozens of pokemon fanfic, you kinda get lost 2. it's well written unlike 80% of pokemon fanfic here 3. MC is strong not simply cos of system 4. the updates are amazing, hope it continues 5. everyone need to understand that most pokemon fanfic here dont reach the amount of ch like this one and even if they do, you can see that they're struggling for content but you can easily see that this one do not have that issue(for now)(hell, mc doesnt even have a full team yet)
man ..... although the points u said at the last kinda make sense. you are a hypocrite . u said that u use stats as a base line but you also say that confuse ray has 100% chance of success. you are just using game stats in your novel so, you shouldn't act all high and mighty like you know everything. The fight with Maria was justified but your arguments in this chapter made me look down on you. Do you know how it feels to find a good book and then u find out that the author is acting like an idiot bcz of some comments. Ppl have things they want and you dont have any right to undermine them . you aren't a god . you may be an author and can control things as u wish in it book but you r too arrogant irl. period.
Author in A/N: Don't look at accuracy, look at surface area, duh Same author two lines later: I chose confuse ray cause it has better accuracy than supersonic.... Wow just wow! Make up your mind author😂 Don't take this against your work tho. Your work is amazing and one of the best fanfics I've read, just pointing out a small thing like how u considered accuracy for confuse ray without thinking of surface area for rock slide, many might not have considered it or would have considered rock slide more like a wall of rock falling and and not a ceiling made of rocks like how some others imagine cause Pokemon game is pretty 2d and is left to your imagination.
thanks for the chapter. half the people that read anything don't like when a mc loses or when they train to win. all they want is a OP mc right off the bat that all he does is win and has *** with any female that looks at him. all I am trying to say is don't take it like a attack on you it is just them being brain dead
in a real world setting accuracy of moves based on games means jack shit ..... moves are trained and honed over time it's called move mastery pretty sure it is a main component of battling real world the more mastered moves are used better faster stronger with less energy expenditure than when they first learn the move. and which fkn opponent is just going to stand there and take your 100%accuracy move and not order his pokemon to dodge the attack ... any move can miss. Accuracy should determine how accurate your pokemon is in aiming it's move at the intended target full stop. and that's just single point attacks not tacking large area of attack moves
First is actually well deserved in my opinion, but what turned me off so much that I almost dropped this fic was when MC acted like a horndog toward Maria. I know it’s a love at first sight and everything but threre’s no chemistry between them (and it still is) I saw many attemp that you force them to make it happen but it just make me feel sad. At this point if you want romance in this fic, I will likely like it more if he is to be raped by Lisa. That’s how bad it is.
First, thanks for the chapter! And second, don't mind the haters, if they don't like the story they should leave, but I am sure there are much more people who find your story as fun and invigorating as me. I have not yet found one story that is so close to reality and yet so fun to read. You are doing an amazing job, please don't stop because of a few haters. Again thank you for the chapter and I can't waiting for the next one.
This is one of the better if not the best I've read pokemon fan fic so far since I've been into nuzlockes. It just have a right feel to it. Unlike the others that has a forced scene all over. There's even one that his MC fcks every single jenny and joy in every town. I've tried to read it for pokemon content but it's more like a smut fic now. I would not even be surprised if he includes waifu pokemon on his harem