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Comments of chapter undefined of Mushoku Tensei: Arthur Greyrat. The elder twin brother of Rudeus

Mike_Smith
Mike_SmithLv3Mike_Smith

your in a world of magic.. and author defaults to sword.. you get cheats. and you limit your magic., you go to an isekai world with cheap but loyal manpower, you can create contracts to be the shield and sword for your hands. and you still want to swing a metal stick. mc iq.. very similar to a parrot sees a shiny thing and admire it. honestly this is disappointing from the get go. and while I like joining the isekai.. why do you need haki from one piece. sure it is a good power. but there are so many that are better. I would have at least stuck to magic. or crafting. maybe even something like trainer or teacher. so your manpower do all the work for you.

Daoist198784
Daoist198784Lv4Daoist198784

You did not give him any cheat, on the contrary, you limited him. The desire for a strong physical body and the talent for wielding a sword is normal. But why does he need hacks? Why doesn't he want massive mana reserves? With the help of magic, he can perform all the functions of a hack. Yes, and when he has a very strong defense khaki weapons are no longer needed.

Rudeus_GreyratRoxy:Well I just don't want to have power which is very complicated... This is my first time writing a story myself so I avoided powers like Sharingan, Kamehameha, Ki, Chakra, Nen... I just wanted simple cheat that should be easy to understand and not stress myself from complicated powers...
ReaperDZero
ReaperDZeroLv4ReaperDZero

I like the consept a lot but Its not worth it for havinf such a limted mana supply

Areize
AreizeLv5Areize

so first chapter what it tells at the moment the MC is dumb trading mana for Haji the MC is not a creative one the MC might develop a constant reliance on rudy the MC will be rudy guard dog based on his build Rudy is the main MC for now the insert one will be a side for now dropping this after five chapters to ten to see if there are no change

Hwanje
HwanjeLv5Hwanje

Bro, da heck y limit mana

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Dao_Master211
Dao_Master211Lv6Dao_Master211

I was like wtf first but i because of limited mana but i remembered that rudeus still got his ass kicked even with his high mana and armor.

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6Weirdo

Sigh... He trade the cool magic with physical prowess... Strong, but it's way off the world mainstream powerhouse...

NerdPeter
NerdPeterLv5NerdPeter

Can’t you create something similar to Haki with magic? I mean it’s magic, it’s bends reality to what we want. So wasteful.

Melshan
MelshanLv6Melshan

By the title of the novel, already screams "MC secondary" πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

snoobe18
snoobe18Lv3snoobe18

heyy those curse it will be forever or not, if like that thene mc can do is quit limited, because for i know in these novel mana is the fuel of a person

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anzafay21
anzafay21Lv6anzafay21

curious to see how our mc will change the world around him. keep up the amazing work! looking forward to the next chapter!!

LuluViBritania
LuluViBritaniaLv5LuluViBritania

No matter how good your story is having this irritating Arthur: Hello my name is Arthur Greyrat Rudeus: and im his brother Rudeus Greyrat β€œWhy are you using that irritating chat system method of talking, you will scare off a large portion of readers regardless of how good your story possibly is.” Asks a random reader

sunschao
sunschaoLv4sunschao

a pretty much no limit body with haki instead of magic doesn't seem to bad, hell he'll prob start doing those sword slashes from one piece soon

noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv5noobageddon_

Bro, you did not include the 3 swords styles and their level in your auxiliary and only have magic level. Then on the first chapter you remove mc’s chance of being a powerful mage. Lol. although i like that he is not a mage like his brother, but having an extra saint level spell is not bad.

grigrait
grigraitLv4grigrait

hey i am the guy who read to 20th vol ch9 skipped to the ending coz it was getting too dark

leonel551
leonel551Lv5leonel551

why is he laughing like a retarded just because he has a brother?

God_Of_Laziness
God_Of_LazinessLv3God_Of_Laziness

Thanks for the amazing chapters!

magapi
magapiLv4magapi

the animation will be release on 2021...i hope u update more chapters in the future

Athala_belzen
Athala_belzenLv1Athala_belzen

keep haki author πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯ haki is really strong I think πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Hunvgbsv
HunvgbsvLv3Hunvgbsv

remove the curse or atleast give him some way to overcome the curse

happy360
happy360Lv4happy360

thanks for the chapter