your in a world of magic.. and author defaults to sword.. you get cheats. and you limit your magic., you go to an isekai world with cheap but loyal manpower, you can create contracts to be the shield and sword for your hands. and you still want to swing a metal stick. mc iq.. very similar to a parrot sees a shiny thing and admire it. honestly this is disappointing from the get go. and while I like joining the isekai.. why do you need haki from one piece. sure it is a good power. but there are so many that are better. I would have at least stuck to magic. or crafting. maybe even something like trainer or teacher. so your manpower do all the work for you.
You did not give him any cheat, on the contrary, you limited him. The desire for a strong physical body and the talent for wielding a sword is normal. But why does he need hacks? Why doesn't he want massive mana reserves? With the help of magic, he can perform all the functions of a hack. Yes, and when he has a very strong defense khaki weapons are no longer needed.
Rudeus_GreyratRoxy:Well I just don't want to have power which is very complicated... This is my first time writing a story myself so I avoided powers like Sharingan, Kamehameha, Ki, Chakra, Nen... I just wanted simple cheat that should be easy to understand and not stress myself from complicated powers...
so first chapter what it tells at the moment the MC is dumb trading mana for Haji the MC is not a creative one the MC might develop a constant reliance on rudy the MC will be rudy guard dog based on his build Rudy is the main MC for now the insert one will be a side for now dropping this after five chapters to ten to see if there are no change
No matter how good your story is having this irritating Arthur: Hello my name is Arthur Greyrat Rudeus: and im his brother Rudeus Greyrat “Why are you using that irritating chat system method of talking, you will scare off a large portion of readers regardless of how good your story possibly is.” Asks a random reader