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Comments of chapter undefined of Magic and Martial War God

bestbookcritic
bestbookcriticLv1bestbookcritic

is it me or are all these magics from black clover

Empyrium
EmpyriumLv15Empyrium

It is kind of hard to read, could be written better. But good job till now, a fee cliches

Beatme
BeatmeLv6Beatme

a cliché fat loyal friend : get

Aliu_Salawudeen
Aliu_SalawudeenLv1Aliu_Salawudeen

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

TheArcher7
TheArcher7Lv12TheArcher7

Author. I understand you want me to give the story a chance. You have a lot of chapters, so you've improved, but please edit your earlier work so that it's just as enjoyable. You will get way more readers that way.

Malladi
MalladiLv14Malladi

except for a little suspense with black stone, introduction continues. let's get into story fast

Utoh_Uzorchukwu
Utoh_UzorchukwuLv1Utoh_Uzorchukwu

nice

Utoh_Uzorchukwu
Utoh_UzorchukwuLv1Utoh_Uzorchukwu

nice thought I like this chapter I can't wait for the next

supermansupreme
supermansupremeLv4supermansupreme

👍

Strickjacob
StrickjacobLv13Strickjacob

nice

OMEGAS
OMEGASLv11OMEGAS

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Bright_blaze
Bright_blazeLv3Bright_blaze

Please don’t be a cliche where mc has no element🙏

Snowclan679
Snowclan679Lv1Snowclan679

WHAT THE HECK IS IT WITH THE LOYAL FAT FRIEND

Redarrow14150
Redarrow14150Lv15Redarrow14150

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

zeick671
zeick671Lv6zeick671

Venerable_Junior
Venerable_JuniorLv2Venerable_Junior

noice

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx for the chap

King_Of_Beast
King_Of_BeastLv2King_Of_Beast

Awesome chapter

Sandhya_Rijal
Sandhya_RijalLv1Sandhya_Rijal

Nice chapter, waiting for new chapters