Comments of chapter undefined of Saiyan in Marvel (Completed)

poor Natasha, the women was devoted to him for so many years and he just erased her memory

I sincerely regret reading this ... Well, thanks for the story I think

Thank you but **** was that a shit way to deal with natasha and all that stuff at the end with their adventures, did you proof read ? Some made 0 sense, such a shame because the first 9/10 chapters were brilliant

it was great at the beginning, good idea, bad developed but in the end, you didn't change anything important, you have potential you seriously need an editor or good feedback not only I didn't like this, try posting some of your work to spacebattles. Keep writing and you will get better at it Good luck

thanks for the book but like **** you for the way you felt with natasha

As much as i was upset about the Natasha thing, i really enjoyed the story and i really enjoyed it. it would have been better if we got some other perspectives as you just fixed nat and then nothing. what happened to her, what happened to everyone else. you even set up a thing where she might remember him, that went bo where.

thx but I kinda disagree with how u dealt with nat's genuine feelings but it kinda makes sense too cause reese was half with her for just a distraction but still could've been better but see u in your other stories.

The whole thing with Natasha was such a dick move man, why!?

To wish a borderline Yandere Natasha to be normal.... Just remove her obsession from memory and the rest will fall into place. It was an entertaining ride, though Natasha could have a better ending. Like wish that she would soon find her true love, only to come back to him even with her memory wipe. That would have to impress true love, and would of been more acceptable. Anyway hellla nice job. Good book. Even better read. Post a new chapter, if you release another works of yours on Webnovel.

Cheers for the good story mate!! It was entertaining, funny and the long chapters were great.

Well that was just a waste of time

Im looking firward to your next work

I dont see any type of stricture or solid story here but i love it

while not completely happy with the ending

Dont you need to sacrifice someone you love to get the soul stone. This means that reese did love natasha and then you turn around and erase her memories about him while the avengers weirdly didnt say anything about that action seems kind of unnecessary. It also seemed like gwen wanted to talk to natasha but you never explored that either. So reese only erased her memories and not her possessions because she might have pictures or even a diary that would lead her to investigate who he is leading to someone in the avengers telling her about who he was. I also dont understand how gwen was so okay with taking someone elses memories since she could be considered a good person. Yeah, the story was entertaining to read but if you are going to lead a love interest on and then just erase her memory and nobody says anything about it then her inclusion in the story is basically unnecessary. Like I mentioned above liked the story overall but natashas part was not well thought out.

Thanks for the story author. now what are you going to write. hope some multiverse travel.

Good novel it was short but it was good and no stupid fillers to meke it longer.

Thank You For The Story

thanks for the chapter keep writing and waiting for new chapters to read Great story and waiting for new chapters for the other stories