Great fiction here! Mc is a mage and necromancer. Dont know what will he became, will he summon skeleton or shadow that will never die like Solo Leveling. Hope you dont drop it soon enough, we support you here.
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The story was really good until he started conquering Westeros the way he dealt with the Baratheon family was probably the first time I was like this is stupid. It just shows what kind of weakl and emotional person he is. no ruler or king would allowing the former royal family to live. people who have claimed your throne and you let them live is one of the dumbest things you can possibly do. Your character is leave a legitimate threat to his rule live. Not to mention it almost feels like you’ve awarded your enemy. What you should have done was cut off Roberts arms and legs kept him alive chained to your throne then you should have taxed every rebel kingdom half of their total income and require the death of one in every ten adults males. That execution needs to be carried out by the actual ruling family of each territory. What do even better do what his ancestors did and completely wipe out those houses and put loyal houses to rule those areas instead.
WOW!! just WOW!! THIS IS HIDDEN GEM!!! HIDDEN GEM I SAY!! Smart MC...check! Magic.....check! Great storyflow...check! Can't wait for next chapter...check!
The story has, or had, a lot of potential. But it bores me, I did not come for this, maybe it is not my cup of tea how things are taking at the moment, nor the decisions that the MC has made, and will make, for the convenience of the plot, as if it has no life of its own . Still, the quality of the writing and everything else is very refreshing ... but honestly, my feelings for keeping me reading have faded as I read the chapters. If you can handle this, congratulations, the story is not bad ... although I got carried away a lot by the TAGs and made expectations inside my head, expectations that were never met. Great work and peace
This is def a hidden gem, the story is very slow placed, with alot more chapters, i could 100% see this novel being one of the best GOT fanfics on this website 0
AMAZING READ! Interesting Characters and development of them and the plot. Multiverse? could be or not, the potential is there. Overall juust amazing!
Loving this so far. I like how you used Crusader Kings 2 traits for this stats. . . . . . . . . .
Writing Quality - Is excelent for the quality of novels on this site. 5 stars Stability of Updates - Just finished reading it all, through the dates of the chapters there seems to be some kind of "order" but could be better. 4 stars Story Development - So, I will not spoil but the plot is not taking the canon side, and is going in completely other way. Add to the fact a Targaryen OC child and well so far I am satisfied. 5 stars Character Design - Is done wonderfully, MC and the characters around him feel real, especially mc who is an OC but actually feels like part of the world 5 stars World Background - Now as this is a fanfic I will not give the world a 5 star but author does a very good job of making the world feel alive. 4 stars
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In this fanfic there are no faceless men and Valyrian steel swords, right? ________________________________________________________________________
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PLEASE AUTHOR DON'T DROP I GIFTED YOU POWER STONE SO PLEASE PLEASE DONT ILL CURSE YOUR ENTIRE FAMILY TO ROT IF YOU DROP OF COURSE IT IS AFTER YOU DID
Please post more🙏. It's a great fanfic.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏.
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it is hard to find mildly serious fictions like this where you dont hate the main character for being angsty. it is hard to find stories where the author can make the tensions between characters make up for the lack of physical risk to the mc. after all, it is unlikely for him to be hurt by most characters. however, the interactions and consequences make a good substitute. good job dude
