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YuuRin

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YuuRin
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Hello, this is your usual author who will give a full 5 star to his own fanfics while explaining few things for this series. First of all, volume 1 will be focused on building up the world where MC lives, so there will be plenty of characters that I needed to introduced in this volume as I couldn't insert them randomly when our MC start to travel into the different worlds. If you don't like it, so be it. 2nd is about the Master Clans and the characters that I have named will be having a major role in the future so I will definitely Include them in Volume 1. 3rd is about MC, that will gonna travel into the MMORPG World first before he could travel into the world of anime but plenty of anime characters will show up even without going into the anime world. Next is read the synopsis first, where I already given some hints for this series. Bonus: MMORPG List: MU Online, Ragnarok Online, Ran Online, ???????? Anime Worlds: Fairy Tail, To Love Ru, One Piece, ???????? Give me some list for MMORPG and I'll try to pick one for the future journeys.

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Alex1911
Alex1911Lv6Alex1911

Reveal spoiler

SaintLolicon
SaintLoliconLv3SaintLolicon

By the power of the Loli, i have been summoned to do a review. Don't be afraid as i will not kidnap them away from the author. But you must not forget to write more chapters for the loli

FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6FAP_Master_

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Yuna_Lover
Yuna_LoverLv3Yuna_Lover

I see Harem I Like! I see Harem I Like! I see Harem I Like! I see Harem I Like! I see Harem I Like! I see Harem I Like! I see Harem I Like!

No_Good_No_Life
No_Good_No_LifeLv2No_Good_No_Life

Fanfic with a guild looks new to me and it did not start on fairytail. I am looking forward about the guild that the author referring into.

Shiro958
Shiro958Lv2Shiro958

I will leave this star review for this author stability of release and tried his best to write a world background, character design and story development

BigNovelBigDream
BigNovelBigDreamLv1BigNovelBigDream

This book is amazing, keep going!Β Β Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

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xXZirconiumXx
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Keep up the stable release of Chapters and progress of improvement of your writing. I only hope for more chapters in the future and mc to travel in other anime world too.

Mux
MuxLv1Mux

Those punchlines are great, but I'm still confused too and I just want to ask. Does being a Lolicon will tend to like and become a siscon or being a siscon makes you a lolicon too?

Nayeon_
Nayeon_Lv1Nayeon_

I like how author include the items of Dota2 in the story, will be looking forward if the author will visit the world of Warcraft or include the other items that are outside of the purchased item in the game.

WinterSky
WinterSkyLv2WinterSky

Author was honest about being a new writer. First few chapters are a little bit confusing but it gets better when a unknown army of other country invade. So far the system is only introduced at 2nd Volume but I like how the author gives us the information regarding to the skills and other stuffs unlike other novels which I can't imagine their attack with fancy names, and author didn't disappoint me after the author reach 70 chapters because the story was way more better than the first chapters. but I still like the chapter when they troll inside a coffee shop.

NekoSamaa
NekoSamaaLv2NekoSamaa

Honestly, the contents of the first volume were probably because the author was just a beginner. The story progress so far but with few flashbacks that the readers without patience or kids are easily confused. Just give it a try and chance for the author to have more experience as the author to continue to write than acting like a spoiled brat who thought that writing a novel is easy. Volume 2 is already better too.

Ravindra_1996
Ravindra_1996Lv11Ravindra_1996

Waiting for more chapters. The story building is quite good. I like the theme of MMORPG and would love to continue reading the story. I also like the guild part.

Yayap
YayapLv12Yayap

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NthSHI
NthSHILv4NthSHI

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Nafsu_geass28
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