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Comments of chapter undefined of The Advent of Spirits

DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6DragonkingKyo

thanks for the chapter

ZE5T
ZE5TLv4ZE5T

... this is the opposite of what I normally say but I wanna see shido's reaction after learning that he was holding back from using his right side

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Nildred
NildredLv4Nildred

Thanks for the chapter

KuMoKo
KuMoKoLv6KuMoKo

Thanks for the chapter ~!

DarkDream
DarkDreamLv5DarkDream

Podrías concentrarte en cómo shido entrena a esos héroes es decir como cambia toda la historia de mha así sacas mås contenido, otro ejemplo sería que hagas algo así como sagas por ejemplo orita estas en la saga de mha, otra saga puede ser naruto, otra saga puede ser bleach la cosa es que tienes mucho potencial algo así como una profesora que entrena héroes o villanos quien sabe pero sería interesante

Draknort
DraknortLv3Draknort

I think it's more boring if MC is weak first, there are too many examples. MC is too strong more interesting, as long as it is not too focused on the original story, it will be fun if MC walks an adventure, of course it will be boring if a strong MC continues with school children.

Dark_lord_shadow
Dark_lord_shadowLv5Dark_lord_shadow

Thanks for the chapter. :)

Ace2hunter
Ace2hunterLv14Ace2hunter

first

Ace2hunter
Ace2hunterLv14Ace2hunter

thanks for the chapter

ahmed_waleed_1200
ahmed_waleed_1200Lv5ahmed_waleed_1200

thanks for the chapter

Mr_SlimePB
Mr_SlimePBLv10Mr_SlimePB

thanks for the chapter[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] also can shido instead of making izuku as a friend, make him an acquaintance. it would be more interesting if shido doesn't help izuku instead is neutral and watch from the sidelines. my opinion of izuku would be a tiny bit of obsession on heroes and all might but it is just an opinion[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Alex1911
Alex1911Lv6Alex1911

Thank for the chapter

I_Cahya
I_CahyaLv4I_Cahya

more more more

PrinceSloth
PrinceSlothLv3PrinceSloth

Thanks for the chapter

3RR0R_404
3RR0R_404Lv43RR0R_404

I mean, you could bring him to other worlds or just focus on slice of life stuff.

Phi0fany_11531
Phi0fany_11531Lv13Phi0fany_11531

thank for the chapter 👍

TheCreatorOfRice
TheCreatorOfRiceLv13TheCreatorOfRice

Nice