Reviews of The Adventures Of The Young Master
The Adventures Of The Young Master
Brei
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WHY IS THIS NOVEL GO UNNOTICED THO?? I THINK THIS NOVEL IS ACTUALLY THE CUP OF TEA TO MANY PEOPLE!! HEY YOU, YES YOU THE ONE READING THIS! GO READ THIS NOVEL!!
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Hello, everyone! This is your author, Brei. I just want to thank you all for visiting (at least) this page. And if you have the time, you can check out the novel and if it's your cup of tea, please read until the end if it's possible. Please be reminded that this novel has started way back 2018, a month after original authors came into picture (I guess) so any similarities from the new novels are purely coincidence. I am an inexperienced author, so please bear with me. Also, if you think that privilege chapters are expensive, you can check out my Patreon. Patreon.com/brei12 Any donation will be deeply appreciated. Thank you, and take care everyone! Cheers, until the end.
The story starts off well enough. Minor weird or bad points but well within acceptable levels. However the sypnosis is very misleading because his "grand plan" took 1 paragraph to unfold. And it wasmt really much of a plan. Quality rapidly took a deep dive downwards as the story continued. English standard clearly went down sharply and characters say or do or think things in an incredibly convenient way for the sake of the plot, often acting in ways that totally disregard any resemblance of intelligence the character may have previously displayed. Author tries to use certain phrases in wrong ways or simply force them into a persons speech leading to awkard lines of dialogue or paragraphs that are impossible to read. The worse of which was when he tried to combine 2 phrases into a line: Hold your high horses. Overall, story quality is barely average and quickly drops off into mindless territory with highly inconsistent characters. English quality starts at proper english before rpaidly becoming a hodgepot of barely legible paragraphs, overly bombastic but meaningless lines and tottally unreadble paragraphs. Read it if you are bored with nothing else to read between updates and you like the genre. Recommen you at least have complete mastery of english so that you can understand the pidgin gibberish this novel tries to use so often.
Another hidden gem, uploaded silently. Let's see if it goes unnoticed. For those interested, is a faceslap novel, the MC is basically an OP sheltered young lord but ignorant of the outside world, wich makes him decided scape and roamed the world meeting possible followers, slapping the face of the disrespectful and being domineering when the situation is needed so it's funny and entertaining... good for those that enjoyed LoHP, Absolute Teacher, and so.
The story is a mishmash of all the good things a normal Xianxia reader likes. Some of the tropes like face slapping, power imbalance and way too overpowered Mc with looks that could kill anyone and nigh-omnipotence. The story is character centred and simple plots that have easy resolutions. The story is suitable for consumption as a daily dose, but not binge reading. I do not want to comment on the negatives but encourage people just giving it a chance and then decide if it's you're cup of tea.
Most people from WN and RR already know the settings for this novel. Beloved by everyone, missed by many...If only the Author didn't have his period back then 🙄 .. Anyway, this novel unfortunately lacks a bit compared to the original, doesn't flow as good and is a bit too cliché, but the story is still really interesting and I can't say if the more advanced chapters become better. No masterpiece, but still good to read and worth it if you want to binge away your day.
the story was good till now until the MC takes responsibility of a child in chapter 290, it seems like the MC is a priest rather than a king, and he is only 15 years old, so what's the need to make him a Dad this early without even a partner at that. I thinking of dropping it now. I really liked the character creation and world. Still it could have been better...
It is a better version of legend of the perfect emperor that doesnt get dropped halfway through 3 times. its a reallyyyyyy good read and in no way get the recognition it deserves. i would put it with some of my favorite novels out there. Heres a quick summary. So basically the 18 yearold leader of rhe universe goes on an adventure because he board being a king. Has a good slice of life story, great world buiding so far (chapter 476) and Absolutely amazing character development. its an amazing novel and i 100% reccomend it. i really hope it gets the recognition it deserves in the future, maybe ever going as far as top 5 on the power stone rankings. overall a really enjoyable read.
Okay..not gonna lie..this novel deserve better and more attention than trash piece of garbage novels where the mc is just a fking rubbish rotten piece of mushroom. I like you author.. To make the mc strong is what makes the novel good..i like seeing a different type of wuxua novel where the arrogant young master is the mc and not the oooother way around..i like how mc trample all trash mortals with hhis finger.. I lilike how mc have a lot of strong loyal general where he can order them to do his task.. i fuking like mc with family that dotted on him and hhis family are fking strong.. what i dont fking like about other novels is that tthey keep making tthe same cliche starts where mc is super fuking dog feces weak piece of rodent weiner bone that get powers randomly but fking weak regardless..keep getting bullied and only to be saved by plot armors.. Also even thou there are soome novels where mc is fking strong.. I HATE THE FACT THAT THEY ARE TOO FKING LOWKEY WHICH LITERALLY MADE THE MC OF THESE NOVELS KEEP HAVING SCENE WHERE PEOPLE THROW TRASH AT HIM, THIS MAKE ME FEEL LIKE KILLING THE FKING AUTHOR.. i hope that the authors who create these novels get brain cancer and die under my piss.
