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Comments of chapter undefined of My Pick Up Artist System

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Senpai_Actual
Senpai_ActualLv3Senpai_Actual

Plot Twist: Katie turns into a yandere after knowing that he is seeing other girls.

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Kingster1001
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If you dump Katie I will be sad! I have faith you can make it work!

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shashank_bhatt
shashank_bhattLv13shashank_bhatt

Who knows maybe Katie will turn into Yandere?🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪

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4n0
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katie x olivia?

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EricI
EricILv13EricI

well, kudos to Ben for being honest. stage 5 virgin clinger is a thing, but he did well

Jorlat123
Jorlat123Lv13Jorlat123

Ok, guess I'll stop here. I find the novel really good and you can find some great food for thoughts in it. You can see that the author is experienced and did a good job writing his story. But I guess, I can't just stomached that the MC cheating openly to the girls he knows that loves him. Not really fair to the girls, at the very least he should just let them go. He used to be bullied so he knows what that feels yet he does the same to the girls emotionally which is much worse to what he experience. He is honest, I give him that but still it's not right to still hold a girl/s knowing that she knows he will still see others. I know the novel is aiming him to be a player/pick up artists/alpha but there should still be limitations. I know this is fiction but if possible it should be realistically fictitious. Well different culture. different views, my views can't help me continue reading the story anymore. But still, I need to thanked the author for letting me enjoy reading this great story until this chapter. I hope MC can learn to reciprocate the girls feelings for him whether it ends up in a harem or not. Looking forward to author's next story in the future :)

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kaban
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I NEED A SPIN-OFF ABOUT HIM MARRYING KARIE, HAVING A FAMILY AND FULFILLING HER DREAMS!!!! WITH LOTS OF CUTE INTERACTIONS BETWEEN BOTH OF THEM I WILL PAY JUST SAY YOUR COST AUTHOR PLEASE 😭😭

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gubba_pa2mbe
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That was way better... and confusing.. than I expected.. So Author-san I see you have chosen the Grand Path of the Harem.. I thought the women would come and go..

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kaban
kabanLv14kaban

a new yandere is born??

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Togo2000
Togo2000Lv4Togo2000

Thx Chapt

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Togo2000
Togo2000Lv4Togo2000

Thx Chapt

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Togo2000
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Thx Chapt

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Eol
EolLv4Eol

Kudos for being honest...

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1Blaze14
1Blaze14Lv21Blaze14

Thats a Good chapter

Axel_Furnace
Axel_FurnaceLv14Axel_Furnace

Katie is number 1 wifu

IAmALazyIdiot
IAmALazyIdiotLv1IAmALazyIdiot

If he dumped katie later i would be very sad

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Carlos
CarlosLv14Carlos

thanks

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GrimAngel01
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thanks

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Dark19
Dark19Lv11Dark19

Thanks forthe chapter.

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bored_mortal
bored_mortalLv11bored_mortal

Great chapter ^^