Comments of chapter undefined of Endbringer

Haven't started reading yet but I didn't know where to point this out. Your synopsis has a lot of grammatical errors, mostly run-on sentences. I rewrote it below, you can copy-paste it or use it as a reference to fix your synopsis: 40 years ago, our world believed that magic was merely a myth, a fiction, and nothing more. But that all changed when it was recently revealed that magic truly does exist to the public. To that end, a place was created, a place where magic can be studied and taught. And that place is Takamagahara Island, the home of a certain Kurokami Tatsuro: a young man who just wants to live his days with nary a trouble. That is until he has a fateful encounter one day, an encounter that would change not only his life but the entire world ...

Okay so you have made a few errors but who doesn't, but let's get down to the real deal shall we😂. This is good! This is so good, i know this is just the first chapter but damnnnnnnnnnnn its fireeeeeeeee😁😁😁

Interesting Start! For the most part, the only issues are some grammatical errors that do break up the flow, sometimes and the use of more tell than show. With a little editing, this will be very sharp! 💕👌🏾💕💕

Cool! I wish i have telekinesis ability!

The author has an interesting style of narration, in between first and third person. I like that the author talks directly to the reader

The form of writing is definitely unique especially the narration, reminded me of movies of a story teller. I enjoyed it but personally I prefer to read them in smaller chapter so I could come back after when I'm free. All in all, well done author ☺

A meu amigo de Portugal. Estou lendo a história e até agora está bastante interessante

Cute :)

I definitely enjoyed reading this chapter! Apart from the few grammatical errors, your descriptions and overall writing of the chapter is very good. Your book is already in my library, I'm just waiting for some free time to continue reading. Don't stop writing, please!

Interesting! I like the way you talk to the readers.

Thx for the chap!

Thx for the chap

pretty long chapter! Nice!

Overall, pretty decent. You do have a lot of grammatical errors you might want to go through and change, though. I have a suspicion that English isn't your native language or you're new-ish to writing, so I'll give you an easy pass on it.