this was kinda predictable ... many authors try to involve ENTIRE oc worlds in fanfics and make fanfics boring af ... this makes it feel like you are trying to trick us into reading a story that otherwise would get 0 views by calling it a fanfic and involving naruto for awhile ...
i don't known what to say but sorry i leave it's not naruto story again.
first half your story not bad but you make other dimention come to the naruto word.
its too soon to add new elements to the naruto world you didnt even took care of zetsu e kaguya threat author...sigh, novel was going ok but now...im dropping it here.