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Reviews of World Of Heroes: System of the Firstborn

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World Of Heroes: System of the Firstborn

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Hey guys, author here, I hope everyone enjoys my novel and can leave some comments and reviews to help my novel improve. Also of course I'd give myself 5 stars, I like my story lol.

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Uh, so did anyone else notice that around chapter 5 it switched to a third person point of view? don't get me wrong, switching to third person makes the novel flow better and Im actually enjoying this book. for one a lot of other authors wouldve just had some random bs happen to make the sword kill the worm when it shattered, where this one actually has the characters be more human, prone to making mistakes, and thinking outside the box in desperate situations.