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Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Demon System

Lord_Mango
Lord_MangoLv14Lord_Mango

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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NebulousArcana
NebulousArcanaLv14NebulousArcana

Lol already a better start than -My Vampire System- Aighty author idk if you'll get around to giving first chapter comments a look but I'm just telling you from now. You honestly can't do worse than that sh*t rag sitting at the top of the rankings, the author of that "novel" literally creates new arcs and facets of the world one chapter at a time and honestly from what I know when he sends his crap in to get edited by the Webnovel team they really have a headache deciphering all the "ideas" he decides to throw in so... yeah.. Those are my parting words, you can't do much worse and of you do then I'ma be really f*cking depressed for the future of this genre.

SimpleSlash
SimpleSlashLv14SimpleSlash

So this is an copy of that book “the vampire system” huh. I hope the Mc not an pu$$y like that one then

elano77
elano77Lv12elano77

Yooooo, We love to see it. This is how you start a story. Most novels don't explain how or why society changes into a "strong eat the weak" one. This novel did it perfectly. Author, you know your shiit, I'm begging you not to drop.🙇🏾‍♂️🙇🏾‍♂️🙇🏾‍♂️🙇🏾‍♂️🙇🏾‍♂️

lordseven
lordsevenLv15lordseven

I like how author introduced nicely the appearances of abilities and the reason for a society ruled by strength. there were some weak parts though like how naively humans reached peace for 100 years despite the discovery of new energy or how countries merged and fell... excited about the work though.

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Marx69
Marx69Lv13Marx69

Holy wow, why there's not a lot of people here? You guys should come storming this novel! It's really good

BL00DY
BL00DYLv4BL00DY

There are similarities to "my vampire system" like 1 ability but it will be 100% better, in the end there is only few stupid authors who would make their MC retarded like in "mvs". I hope you aren't one of them Drip, because I liked idea of background like this but because MC was so stupid I couldn't continue to read "mvs". Sorry for writing about "mvs" but author of it deleted 3 of my ratings with comment which was for 700letters which were truest my thoughts about his novel.

Morggyb
MorggybLv5Morggyb

Sooo anyone thinking Alexander might be the current leader? Maybe he got two abilities from the first green liquid drop then having the next green liquid shooting towards him...ik hes not the mc but just sayin

Shurin
ShurinLv11Shurin

i love when authors start their stories with introduction to the world

Mr_Unfortunate89
Mr_Unfortunate89Lv10Mr_Unfortunate89

So ahm... What's the use of that stone in the altar then?

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DaoistLingtian
DaoistLingtianLv11DaoistLingtian

Where’s that archeologist that started all of this...hows he....is he dead...possibly ended up with the strongest ability...Author where art thou...my curiosity is killing me

TeddyPenguin
TeddyPenguinLv15TeddyPenguin

so similar to vampire system

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Techno_God
Techno_GodLv3Techno_God

ok

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Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15Dreamstrafe

this sounds distinctly similar to my vampire system 🤔

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Snoodle_Booper
Snoodle_BooperLv4Snoodle_Booper

Time to reread the first 6 and finally start reading this properly

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Cookie_Void
Cookie_VoidLv4Cookie_Void

It seems to be a good story

PathLiar
PathLiarLv3PathLiar

Exp

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Dayzi_423
Dayzi_423Lv3Dayzi_423

Author. I have read Hundreds of books and this is by FAR the best intro I have ever read. Thank you for this wonderful book.

SilenceOfDeath
SilenceOfDeathLv3SilenceOfDeath

intresting

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Pyrrosis
PyrrosisLv13Pyrrosis

I love -My Vampire System- it's my favorite book on this site and this one seems to be similar. I can't wait to see the direction this book takes and see how it differs from MVS 😁

Glee_Man
Glee_ManLv12Glee_Man

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle