Uwahhh, my heart got ripped reading this :')
This book is great! The hook is amazing, and in a few chaps it had messed with my emotion, which is an absolutely great sign hehe! :D
The character's emotions are explained very well and in such a poetic way. Also, the fact that the characters have flaws and made mistakes make them feel even more real hehe :D
Kudos to you, author! Great work! <3