strawberia
Good work author 😊👍 Really intriguing beginning and excited to know about the mystery behind her dreams 🧐That was an awesome start to the story ❤️ Writing is also good. But I think there is an unconscious switch between the past and present tense in the narrative. If it gets consistent in tense then it's all good and perfect! 👍🔥🤗 Love the story author! Waiting for more updates 💕 Keep it up and good luck. 🥰