Comments of chapter undefined of The Great Lion

Finally some perspective on his physical stature! Also a good way to show it, having him being so pissed of he just picks up a grown-ass man, it definitely gives us some perspective. I'm enjoying how he isn't some stone-faced politician either, he gets pissed off like a real person, just instead of someone like the mountain lashing out and flinging someone across the room, he just holds the dude there. He has feelings, which frankly not all GoT fics do, and the fact that his anger is less burning rage and more controlled fury makes it all-the-more realistic for someone whom Tywin of all people is grooming as a successor.

Thanks for the chapter, it's great to see a GoT fic where the MC can't beat everything and everyone, every, single, time. GoT was a good show precisely because we couldn't predict what would happen, and while I'd like to see our MC beat the crap out of the brother ****er, the novel is on the right track right now.

I like this. A lot of GoT fanfics make use of blindly loyal followers of the MC, and it usually works out in the MC’s favor. This chapter shows that lotalty is useless in a subordinate without intelligence. I really like the realism

Hell yeah. Really showing what level of physical prowess Lancel has. Him beating people in sword play or knocking people off Horses could be attributed to his skill and technique...but holding an armored man (I assume he's armored anyway) up with a single hand, and with ease at that? That's pure physical force. I feel like if Cersei (or anyone really) saw that she'd think twice about pissing Lancel off lmao. Lancel's a f*cking juggernaut, man. The strength needed to pick someone up with a single hand is insane...especially the strength needed to do it with ease. Can't wait for some proper fights where he's on a battlefield and fighting in an army - if that ever happens.

this chapter can only be summed up in one word - frustration.

Your superior writing and story telling skills are only impeded by your infuriating update schedule.

if you are going to drop, can you post if you are going to drop or not? why I love this story, but waiting is killing me

Great chapter, i can't wait to see how lancel will handle ned. I am already predicting that sansa will have a crush on the young lion. Though it should be easier to handle ned now that he doesn't have varys and baelish whispering in his ears.

Hé forgave twice and that’s already too much. His second is compromised and with Cersei no less. He should kill him here and there.

I would have left his dead body at Cersei door!

need more of this, hope Lancel kicks someone so hard like this

I think with this it proves even more that this story is a sort of twisted wishbfullfilment of an Mc fanboy/obsessed with the Lannister ... It isn't my cup of tea.. you can't put a Got fan Mc supposedly experienced and badass in his previous life and then make him act as a wimpy naive fanboy... It is against got itself ... The only naive ones can be starks or not Si Mcs .. Well my comment it won't change anything probably tha author won't even read it... Well good luck with your work and Mr author and an have fun to the readers who enjoy this kind of story P. S. Mister author the way you are forcing your story to follow Canon is too forced... You should try to work on thinking how to follow Canon (since you aiming for that) without making your Mc a naive fool... No matter what slate should have at the very least to be removed as is second in command since no matter what he kinda betrayed him and screwed him: the path to hell is paved of good intentions is fitting description of this event with the captain and being a zealot or ignorant isn't enough excuse when the Mc won't do anything to change it... It only means poor plot

Danke for the awesome chapter 😊 man your fic is so good that it makes me cry that your release rate is so slow compared to other fics which are trash but update daily 😭 please at least never drop 🙇

nice

welp i waited for 2 months, guess it's dropped

It's been so long that I forgot who slate is 😅.

look i love the story and everything. However I can't wait any longer for that. If you do not wish to continue or will pause for a while, speak in a chapter or comment on it.

Pls, continue this story or I will make that creature in the picture come after you!

T_T Where's the next chapter bruh?

Novel dropped R.I.P