Let's give a review shall we?
First Impressions After Reading the First Chapter.
"I found this novel through Webnovel recommandations. Then I was attracted by the cover and of course the genre. I read the synopsis and decided to shelf it first as it enthralled me a lot. To the point that month later I still remember I have such a book. So after eventually reading the first chapter, it gave me a really good vibe to the point of immediately writing a review!"
"Each paragraph are short and surprisingly, the chapter is quite long. It really look like a novel. There are few to none linguistic mistakes, and the vocabulary is not crude nor vulgar. The story really flows smoothly, like water in a river, with some bumps and twist. The dialogs and thoughts are clearly visible."
"There are movement, thoughts, feelings and emotions, physical language, the immersion in the story is almost possible. And the characters does not feel rigid their reaction almost realistic. (The "horror-movie-like-atmosphere" in the train)."
"And I did not mention the world nor the character background. Yes, the author does not "infodump" us with those details and they prefer an immersive and progressive discovery. So the Novel indeed has action, fantasy, suspense, drama, romance, the potential to be thrilling, and surely very moving and funny"
I'll stop here as I only read the first chapter, but I will certcertainly continue to give review along my reading.
Thank you author for this diamond in the rough novel!
Continue with that momentum and don't pit our protagprotagonist !
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