Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Finally Free

i like the interactions between the charecters and the whole vibe of the story is really good. 10/10

So, i like the story so far and the interaction between the characters too but the story seems quit fast paced. Also please DELETE THE WHOLE I WRITE A DIARY STUFF, just because its in chinese or whatever language doesnt mean that no one will understand it. Look at our planet, we have around 6500 languages and are still able to speak each others and learn theirs. Now throw that into a world where people eat fruits and suddenly have a body made out of lightning or can control others with their mind... (To keep it short, I HATE THE DIARY WRITING, many novels did this just to introduce someone who was able to read it and become the aggonist of the mc of it.) Whatever, no one will read this comment anyway. Great book but i hate the diary drope with passion and my whole heart. Have a nice day and a warm cup of tea my fellow readers. CAST IT INTO THE FIRE MY LORD

Good Work

Feed me more

keep up the good work, try to make story as original as possible with Ken's point of view.

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter. can't wait for sabo and luffy. also does he meet the mayor since he put his food on his tab?

Ace is so funny sometimes, thx for the chap

Another enjoyable chapter, thank you

thanks for the chapter! keep up the amazing work

Yeah do that then destroy garp reputation being the one brings you to marines.

Thanks for the great chapter! 😄

Thanks for the chapter

Hmm i dont really like the whole Ace becoming apart of his crew, your literally making Ace different. And the MC better be reqlly strong by the end of 5 years training with Garp, if he can take a young and very weak Colby and turn him into a pretty strong character that knows stuff like soru in a couple of months, then he should be really strong, like new world strong.

nc d(-_☆)

serious. The writer is very good at making conversations between characters. genius. 100 out of 100

Will he eat a devil fruit or will he be a swordsman?