Comments of chapter undefined of Destined: the Vampire's Soulmate

I like that you do both pov, and i, personally, don’t struggle knowing whose pov I’m reading. Alternating pov can sometimes create a lot of reiteration if you’re repeating a scene, but I haven’t really noticed you overlapping scenes that way. You have done well by showing their reflections over matters that allow the reader to gain the necessary information/point without the reader having to reread the scene. Rewriting a scene is only necessary if there is a stark contrast between the characters’ pov, in my opinion. (If that makes sense) I think you are doing a great job writing the two pov’s. 😊 Excited for more! Thank you for the update! Wonder work ❤️

I like the pov I would like more detail tho about why they look like the surroundings etc

Well said, ArtKitty... I like the POV switching. Good job on it!

I think the interaction is quite compelling the way you've written it.

you are doing an amazing job. keep up the good work

personally I like both

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I love the point of View shifting. Its Unique and intrigi g! I agree with another comment that it could get redundant If you were repeating the same Scenes but you are not and its amazing! Im already hooked! Keep up the good work author

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