Comments of chapter undefined of Memories Like a Dagger

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I'm going to leave it on J to comment about the fighting scenes since he's the expert~ P.S. I have no complains, obviously!

It's good to see you updating your story, buddy! (eh, you don't mind if I can you buddy? If you do, then pardon me) The fight scenes are actually a bit tricky to write, like you have this magnificent fighting scene inside your head but to put it into words... is hard af, at least for me. But you did a vey good job, especially more than two characters in the scene. Only one thing less, I need more gory scene... Anybody agree with me, right? No just me? ok Anyways, Can't wait for the next one...

Awesome narration!😍😍😍

Hey, SolAce! Hope that you can continue this series! Your writing is really good!

I'm highkey shook at how smooth the action scenes were for such a long update (I thought the narration and the actual logic behind the action was 100%)