Comments of chapter undefined of Invincible System in ATG (Hiatus)

I like this aggressive yue more! keep up the good work. cheers

Author, could you change Xia Qing Yu's character to a softer one after the fight with Yun Che? Just in the original, at the very beginning, although she was cold, but not such a bitch as you made her in your works, I know that then she turned into ugly and destroyed her home planet and so on, but it is not known why made by the original author. I hope that Yun Che will help her find her mother, where Xia Qing Yu will find out why she ran away from her family and understand that she has become very distant from her father and brother who cared for her.

bro i would suggest on improving conversations a little more. the way that feng chucheng revealed his plan in one go with villain laugh shouldn't be there. i mean these are people who will keep their facade a lot longer.

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Nice chapter i really like this cang yue more Keep the good work 😄

Thank you for the chapter!

so the chance is slim that mc will make a barbeque for jasmine only, as soon he will be getting bigger harem..example can be seen today as jasmine got food but amidst his harem.

Very interesting

thanks for the chapter

Author, can I ask what you're going to do with Xia Qingyue because in the earlier chapters you foreshadowed her regretting treating Yun Che badly and I do hope you don't go back on yourself. If you add her to his harem can you make it so she has to work very hard for it? Though I would prefer they not end up together at all and if she does end up with him, please make it so it's at the later stages of the story.

Nice chapter loving it very much please give me moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thaaaaaaanks for the chapter ❤️

add Chu yuechan in harem

Perfect

Thanks for the chapter ~!

is this the only atg ff, where fen juecheng Isn't taken care by the mc?

Thanks for the chapter

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so cute lived that she put him in his place