Comments of chapter undefined of In DC Universe with my Wishes (Rewriting in the process)

well..the starting is interesting..so...more chappy

Why do I have the felling it’s going to be cliche because the girlfriend is cheating on him?

One of this typical sad basckstories are from filipino backstories. Most of these stories is based from true stories most filipinos have. They always have a bad and sad storyline.

I hope he will take revenge on that owner of restaurant and those deptors and his father!!

Yep. Your story is quite depressing snd by the way quite good. Im not that familiar with dc comics so i cant pinpoint much what flaws this story has. I'm more into japanese/korean/chinese comics. By the way, good job. When is the Sunshine in Fairytail gonna get an update? Thats a story got quite to my liking.

Dead mom,then house got robbed,and his girlfriend pull a Raynare..

Great chapter btw

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

the chap was soaking wet bro... hope in the future he tones down the water works

Thanks for the chapter

you need to add paragraphs to this badly

Hmmm the prologue is too long but the writing is good

Thanks for the chapter keep writing and waiting for new chapters to read

Thanks for the chapter

This is close to some people's real experiences with quickly losing family to a terminal illness.

NiCe