Sara_Wilcox
Thoroughly enjoying this story! The futuristic aspect is fascinating & I have completely fallen in love with the characters! I am NOT looking forward to the locked chapters as my income is limited but I will be back to build up & save, if only to continue with this story. I have read so many stories recently that have had little to me editing & literally read as if written by a child & it is refreshing to find a proper & mature story. Thank you!
I was suprised to see that this is your first novel. You write very well âď¸ I like how the story gets chopped up. Like how we are in the now but we also learn a lot from paragraphs of their memories. It helps tie it all together quickly. Some authors drag it out. This is a nice way for people like me to stay connected to the story.