Comments of chapter undefined of The Strategist That Succeed With Gallant Power

I'm overwehlmed by new words but I kinda understand the situation of what is happening in the empire and the vassels. I can see that you know much about the politic. I'm not a fan of politic, but of story, which I'm interested in. Even I'm not interest in politic, I read your story yet. Good job for a great prologue[img=recommend]

This chapter was a bit confusing to me 😅😭

sometimes there are missing words/words wrongly used, and that makes this kinda painful to read ngl like I get the gist of the paragraph but the words don't flow well the content is okay though

awsome

Just press enter on the paragraps to seperate them or have the occasional one off sentence it’s what i do for my book and i like how it looka

I feel it needs to be cut down, punctuated or at least seperate the paragraphs more my brain struggled with keeping up with what is going on.

bro, it's a super prologue if you tell me. Descriptive. I loved how you described every nation's situation at just one chapter and your word stock is very rich. Loved the chapter.

good

Nice prologue senpai. It feels like you have knowledge in political science. Kudos.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

nice book

Damn, this prologue is quite intriguing... long but still intriguing makes me want to read the story to understand more about the world you are writing on...

Somehow when reading this chapter, the vibe im getting is somewhat between lord of the rings and games of thrones

very articulated. nice choice of words .love this .♥️

Quite too much for a prologue but let's see the next chap

I like the prologue so amazing for real

I really like the prologue it much more interesting!

If i would say anything then this prologue is actually a prologue more than many others... but you said nothing at all about the story or the background of the world.

Your introduction is good and it is really hopeful

This is honestlynone of the best descriptive writing I have ever read in this platform so far. Even though it is deep, it is fascinating and understandable as well.