Oh. I hope nothing bad happens directly to Leonard's kid. He's innocent in his father's schemes.
Though it's possible that it's not his biological kid.
As a reader: Longer or shorter chapters, it does not matter, as long as you keep them coming. 😉
As a fellow writer: Chapters usually go from 1000 to 1500 words.
When you start with premium chapters, they can't go below 1000 words.
I can’t believe how I was laughing out loud about the ripped pant… my family gave me a weird look… “What?” I hope they didn’t give Violet poison that will cause her more distress…
the story line is amazing. I was not able to stop reading! it doesn't matter how long or short the chapters are, just the content within them. you are a very creative writer. continue to do an amazing job!
I pity the kid but your dad is an asshole so...I know he has his reasons but did he have to harm violet? If they just kidnapped and told her to stay put without harming her, it wouldn't go this far.
I like both long and short chapters, this is a great story, I can't put it down I'm waiting to see what's going on with Violet, I believe she's a special witch that hasn't come into her powers yet.
I know the kid is innocent (presumably), but I'm unsure how he can be kept alive without causing him to want to avenge Leonard's inevitable death. Maybe he can be taught about right and wrong or loved into joining Luke's pack - then, he'd have to listen to the alpha.