Comments of chapter undefined of My Long Lost Mate

I think the story is very interesting so far, but I do also agree when it comes to the writing, I think the use of pas tense and present tense is kind of funky, but that could just be a small nitpick, other words I think the story is very interesting so far, and I also think that this idea's very unique as well.

Thanks God...violet was saved!

Nice start.. i just pick up this novel

The storyline is intriguing, the style of writing the work is peculiar, this is a plus. But the text block needs polishing. The transitions as I wrote earlier should be smoother. Conversations are less formal, more emotion. Perhaps it would be worth rewriting the chapters again. For example, I rewrote my two novels 4 times. They still need rewriting, but they have become brighter and more interesting. So this advice is realistic. You can delete the comment later. This is a technical comment.

As someone who only speaks one language, despite efforts to learn two others, I think it is incredibly impressive that you are writing this novel in English! Not only is it a cool story, but it is told very well! Thank you for sharing your gifts with us!

I like it very much with this kind of story .

🤔 I wonder what Violet will think, waking up in a place like this...😄 Let's hope she doesn't try to run away.

Really loving this so far!🥰

This is really good!

i like your plot☺

It's captivating

Awww. Love such a beautiful thing. Wickedness such an evil thing

he a sweet alpha.

Is Violet human?

I love it !!

So far this book is really good and I don't want to put it down but I have to go to the restroom and get something to eat

good so far

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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon