Reviews of Traveling Throughout The Worlds

Sorry if I review this myself. This is my first novel that I try to publish in english. All of the critics and suggestion all welcomed, thank you for reading my novel :D

The Mc is basically the “real” mc’s *****. It’s sugarcoated by calling them brother but he doesn’t do anything of his own interest. The one thing I actually did like is that he is a descendant of the crow, haven’t seen that before, but everything else is generic. Mc is basically chasing after the other two mcs. Thought it had potential but it’s too unoriginal for my taste. Sorry if I was rude but these are my real thoughts.

The concept of this story is actually quide good. The MC is not like someone who pursue power, instead he pursue freedom. The MC being the descendant of the dark crow is really fresh in my mind, never head any story with Li Qiye as his ancestor, LMAO. The early arc of the story is building the MC potential for his own arc, its not very good nor bad, the author really learn from the reader comments and constantly improving this novel from chap to chap. For me this is worth reading, keep up the good work and dont forget to always try improving this novel quality

The early arc is quite dull, but as the story goes on, its become more interesting. Can't wait when MC goes into ED universe and meets his real Great Ancestor, LMAO

mc looks stupid. there is no clear purpose. every time you switch the 'universe' The MC will always follow the original MC. stupid. there is no creativity of the storyline. you can just make a storyline but in different directions.MC is more of a side character, standing still and watching the original MC in action. when the original MC acted, then the MC moved.What is the use of the system if it is not used. Moreover, the blessing of the "god of luck" with that MC can make its own way. instead of having to always meet the original MC. it's just Useless

Just love the story! And the main thing i love is the world background and character design..........story is going to be interesting.And writing quality....well it is awesome...thanks for the story!!!