Comments of chapter undefined of Prismatic Sovereign's Legacy
Prismatic Sovereign's Legacy
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I understand, but i dont understand maybe you should stick to simple explantions and descriptions. Im guessing English is not your native language and thats fine, but the grammar is making my head hurt which is a shame because the book sounds really interesting and exactly what im looking for but untils the its fixed a bit i can’t read it.😬😞
Your opening sentence, dear, is contradicting, literally. Let me tell you something, this isn't even a higher-level prose writing that you most see among paperback authors. This chapter, if you see, is edited and proofread so unless you specify which part of the prose then I couldn't address this concern of yours, otherwise don't read. I digress about your idea. You tried. Have fun!
I'm confused but intrigued as well. So she was betrayed by some of her subordinates because they thought she was abusing the legacy for her own selfish desires when it was the opposite. Edward was revealed to have killed somebody or people? And then at the end he used a spell that killed everyone except Anastasia
