Comments of chapter undefined of Tales of the Dragon Mortal

Great Start! Love it!

Great start👍

not being mean, but author until you get an editor im gonna stop here. i had an anuerysm reading all of this.

I like the story and hope you're not like the other authors :) They dont even correct anything. I have high hopes ^-^

Can't wait to read all the chapters

Nice one

Aww! Its awesome and the way you play with words... its great!!

The story has some interesting world building, character design and plot! Problems for this chapter are the huge amount of grammatical mistakes.

Damn, I love this so far. Great job

This is so lit, I like it. This story explore us to a new world. It build us to expand our imaginations. Thanks for sharing this story. 😍❤️

Hey this is really cool

cool and exciting.

Cool story

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Ummmm intriguing start.

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