Reviews of 李连杰
李连杰
ApexSpec
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This is if you can read is a harem novel, it says so clearly in the tags, please read, if you hate harem's, please do not read. Don't be like this idiot who left multiple low reviews with the words "This is one of those harem novel about world world traveling and I dislike them so much, so because I dislike harem novels take this 1 star review" Just f*cking stop, if you dislike the mc or how it's written or grammar or developed just say so for the review, don't just drop a review saying you hate harem's. This novel/fan-fic about f"cking harem's so if you hate them go somewhere else or right your own non harem fan-fic. Thank you for my community for supporting this fan-fic and your suggestion, I was just a little annoyed when I saw over 5 one star reviews from newly created spam accounts saying I hate "harem's" for all of them just annoying as f*ck
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Well, let's be honest here, story would never get this whooping score of 4.9 without harem. Because story have a lot of problems. Writting quality is messy, typos and lack of words is expected from new writer, but it's could be understood so no big deal. Story itself nothing great but it's at least works, with some really glaring problems. Like taking an established characters and make them total as-hole to get more girls. Yeah that was pure cringe what you done with poor King. And all for the sake of keeping you mc as kind and upright. Whatever, harem fics have those moments frequently. Characters portrait very shallow. If you read original work, you could see how less impressive they become. On a point that you would never guess who are those people if we just change names. And here comes number one reason why I don't like it. Character of mc. You see half of chapters is his training and getting close to a girl's while he still little kid. And I wouldn't be so salty, if he wasn't immature, cringe, degenerate. Even though he is actually reincarnated and was 17 years old in his previous life... Yeah, I seriously doubt that some 17 years old boy can be this immature. But hey, he is mature after this, right??? ... .... ..... Kinda? He become better, but that's nothing impressive. The most glaring problem, I remember him being part - dragon, only when author points it's out. And say that's he does show us this moments...i don't understand what he is talking about, but hey. Maybe someone else do? Besides author... That's still wouldn't be that's bad to actually give me a reason for this review. You see, when mc is actually became better and we come to an academy arc with more girls and more interesting stuff... Author just throw its all in the window and give us arc that have no sense and most importantly , introducing us to a characters that apparently could destroy multiverse and create it. Why? Because they are cute girls... Oh and mc degraded to his previous cringe self with being fearful to this new monstrosities...fucking brilliant. I applaud to this very important and needed part with all my limbs. Power scaling is extreme as dbz. If mc already was too fast and easy to gain more power and no people could beat him up in first world, now that's just absurd. Well...i wouldn't recommend this story, especially with how bad his childhood arc was. And when story becomes better author just destroy it, with mc old personality (before reincarnation). And slow release speed. And of course tsundere system, of fucking course... I bet that this story never gonna get over 100 chapters. Because it's a mess. P. S. Delete as much as you want, but that's how this story look for a readers. And am not even trying to be аsshole.
Nice story, but a bit to much crack Comedie for me, the system spirit is more of a overboard character than I expected so yeah that is a tag that is missing. character design is not much as of the moment, so 3 stars for that. If you are up for a short read of a crack fanfic than it is ok but to short to realy sa much.
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