Comments of chapter undefined of Avatar : The Legend of Phoenix
Avatar : The Legend of Phoenix
Daichi_TBR193
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Personally I dont really care who ends up as Zuko’s ‘main’ wife, Toph was my favorite character back when I used to watch the ATLA so imma hope she gets it but Yue would alos be an interesting option.
Daichi_TBR193:Honestly, I’m not completely sure. Your thoughts?
Author I'm just going to give you my view on this At first the premise was good and all but then it started getting weird after he reunited with his mother I think you shouldn't have made her loose memory and make her his servant it loose it's purpose what you can do is make her remember but choose to ally with her son and stand by his side and slowly join his harem when she find herself falling for him after all she love him more than anything so if you do change that it will be better and with more character development so if you choose to correct that chapter and add some line and make their relationship more natural it will be a lot more better another problem is that you make a harem seeking protagonist but the relationship between him and the girls aren't portrayed too much rather you focus on his conquest and not relationships while he still is only 13 or something Also are you going to continue this story or not ?
