Comments of chapter undefined of Face of Fate

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#notabot I liked this first chapter and the idea for your story. I’m a sucker for historical romance. It’s my jam. Your story would greatly benefit from being run through editing software. The grammar isnt fabulous and you mix tenses. Is it past, present or future? Find one and stick with it. I’ll keep reading and hope for future edits 😁

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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

i love it’s starting