Comments of chapter undefined of Dead Invasion: The Cursed Ordeal

The Chapter is really nice. I would like to suggest the use " " For the dialogues. Few punctuations are missing here and there. And try to break the paragraphs into further shorter ones. Most of the readers of WN read from mobile so big paragraphs appear as big chunks of text. I had faced problems for that before. So, try to separate that. Edit the first chapter. ^^ Overall the chapter is quite intriguing. Descriptions are vivid and MC's character was on spot from the beginning. Loved the chapter.