Reviews of HOTD: Legacy [DROPPED]

I enjoy all your other stories but this one is just not for me. First, the fact that you continue off of your other fanfiction is fine, but the way you did it was not to my liking. I spent time enjoying Luci in your marvel fanfiction, reading how he dominates others with his op powers, but now he has a son who’s already stronger than him which just leaves a horrible taste in my mouth and makes me want to roll my eyes. Not only that but his personality as already a no for me. Smokes and drinks just to smoke and drink like there’s no reason at all. Bored forever but you make him go to zombie world with all these op powers. Wouldn’t he be bored forever anyways if he could just stomp anyone? In my opinion you should’ve never made thhis a ‘sequel’ of your other fanfiction and just make it a different one with a human mc who is peaked to the limit because frankly, op godlike powers in zombie world is just boring I’m not trying to hate

Not my style of novel first off the mc personality is pretty chill would have love to read this story if it wasn’t for all the smoking and drinking mentioned throughout the novel. It gets very repetitive and annoying. Again just my opinion not my cup of tea. Read at your own discretion.

The clutter of how his slice worlds are merged together and DXD and zombie worlds are inconsistent .............................................................................. ..........................

A good hotd story with lots of potential and the author is one of the best so be sure to check it 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

You no what bro i enjoyed all your aother books. And i thought just like them this will also be nice. But i am really bored to even read this. It has become like if i don't have anything other to read than read this one.

The premise you follow is he's a thrill seeker... but how would he experience thrills if there are no consequences? He's immortal.. He made his lovers immortal... how would you feel thrill without fear? Smoking cause it's bad for you while you're immortal isn't bad for you.... that's just stupid... You could've made it a gift from his parents.. take away his immortality then throw him in a zombie apocalypse.. he's just a xianxia 2nd generation young master mc...

Dude.... I don't understand... your other fic was fine MC wise... wtf happened? First, you start the MC being a God stronger than Luci in the very beginning, then you decide it's a good idea for him to be smoking and drinking every few paragraphs? How can he even feel the effects of smoking and drinking when he's a God? Dude, did you even think any of this through?

Finally high school of dead and zombie faction. It’s a nice idea to use the background from your other fan-fac. Can’t wait for more!!! 👍🏻🙏 ...........give it a try, you won't regret it

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I like it so far it’s a pretty good HOTD fic can’t wait for more

Everything is very good and I liked how you connect 2 of your stories ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

as usual you make a very good novel, and the background for the mc is nice.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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the main character does not cause any emotions, the rest of the characters look cardboard and not alive, as on NPCs in games...............................

I don’t like to rant and rave normally but it’s needed here. From the first chapter all we see is the mic chugging beer and chain smoking. 30-40% of your story is filler with the mc’s habits of smoking and drinking adding nothing to the story other than annoying readers with waisted time and content. This is not character development so what’s your purpose? Unlimited money and he stocks up on cigarettes and alcohol the day before the apocalypse instead of food water etc. In two and a half months he could have found isolated farm property, stocked it with supplies, obtained building construction materials and vehicles, and have it functional with solar power and water wells or stream. It may get better but I’ve stopped at 17th chapter.

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