Comments of chapter undefined of The Rise Of A Porter

Story's good so far, but it does seem rather close to Only I Level Up. I'd suggest changing the ranking system to colors or something like that. His ice affinity is a good departure from it, so I might suggest making him a dedicated spellcaster, especially if he's gonna get more elements.

His character just suddenly changed, last chapter he was taking abuse so that he would get paid well and now suddenly he has pride and made a scene and got his pay deduced. What happened to his sister being more important than pride.Also, if all porters where treated like that than no one aside from someone in his situation would do the job the job, even then to many people would quit. The government should be providing them was a lot of instentives to do the job. Makes no sense

it's good the story is engaging

I love the way he got his system- not some unique and random kill room, not a random inheritance of an old item he kept for little reason. but from something a part of the known power system-an ability tome i like it

Oh my god. I can't see a single difference from dozens similar books. Even flaws are all the same. It feels like those "from bullied kid to god" stories are produced on the Chinese factory, by clones.

Nice story my guy, you need to work on a few things but otherwise it all good. Keep it up.

Actually, I was hoping to see more about the porter job, and dungeoning. Now he’s going to explain how he suddenly got all mage-y

PLAGIARISM SO FAR

ThIs protagonist is so o.p MAnnn what madman He is

this ish some great reading material uwu. a pity I got to go study....

This is probably one of the more unique kinds of novels, even though there are quite a few with a close idea as this, this one somehow feels more exciting and engaging.

Loved the chapter

I have a high hopes in this novel

Thabks

Splendid !!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Thank you for the chapter 🙏

That was quick.